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Summer Rayne - Shoujo-Ai

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“Rayne what are you doing!!!”  With a slap more violent than she intended Ishizu pushed the blue-haired girl away and stood forwards from the door, mouth and eyes wide with shock. Rayne crumpled to the floor, staring up at her with a hand pressed against her reddening cheek. “Ishizu…” Her voice was quiet with shock. ‘I have to.. no-matter how much hurt I must endure.’ Slowly Rayne stood up and walked forwards again, pressing herself closer to the other girl. “No! Stop.. this is wron.” Ishizu’s eyes opened wide again as Rayne pressed her lips forwards once more, the soft pink oval connecting with her own in a deep, meaningful kiss. Try as she might, she found that this time she couldn’t move, couldn’t push the girl away from her again. She was rapidly being overtaken with foreign sensations that she feared to place and felt she would never dare admit to. Simultaneously with and against her own will she allowed her eyes to flutter closed and almost unconsciously began to press back, even allowing the most gentle breath of a moan to escape her throat. This wasn’t as bad as she had been led to believe; surprisingly it didn’t even feel wrong, didn’t make her feel sick. In fact Rayne’s tender lips felt far nicer than the rough skin and kisses of her few previous male ‘love interests’; that said, they were hardly interested in the ‘love’ aspect at all. Their kisses were harsh and fleeting, a mere formality before idle hands began to wander from her hair to her body.
With Rayne it was different. One soft hand was wrapped snugly around her back, pulling her close and removing all resistance she might have had, and the other was threading up through her golden hair from the base of her neck, cradling her head as if it were the most precious thing on earth. The kiss went on and on seemingly for forever and still there was no movement from Rayne’s hands toward anywhere more private. Ishizu finally began to understand why she had always felt strange around Rayne. It wasn’t Rayne’s characteristic stand-off-ishness and silent demeanour that barricaded her contact to the rest of the world, it was that she, Ishizu had always been enchanted with the silken-haired beauty. Ishizu began to kiss back with increasing fervour, all moral thoughts and worries washing from her mind as the warmth of the kiss melted away rational thought. All Ishizu could concentrate on was the subtly intense passion that flowed from their mouths, and the warmth of their bodies finally making full contact. Rayne’s larger, fuller, breasts pressed against her own and she felt a spark of pleasure shoot from the tips of her nipples to her brain, where fireworks exploded and any trace of doubt that remained was utterly destroyed. Ishizu felt the tips of her own breasts stiffen instantly at the contact and gave an embarrassed whimper.
Rayne moaned gently in unison as Ishizu boldly forced herself towards the next step and dared to open her mouth slightly, darting her tongue quickly over Rayne’s lips. Rayne returned the favour and as Ishizu’s tongue came out to explore once again, they embraced and stumbled over to the bed, the kiss unbroken. Their tongues wresting and sliding around and over one another, Rayne gazed into the most perfect eyes she had ever seen. The grey pools stared back at her without fear, the only visible emotion a yearning for more. Rayne happily obliged, knowing that Ishizu really did care. There had always been something special between them; she had known that. An awkwardness just on the fringes of their friendship that neither had voiced, even to themselves for many years. It was strange to think that they had known each other for so long as to be sisters in all but blood, but never in those 13 years had their relationship blossomed further. That awkwardness had always been an impassable barrier, only made more invincible by their unwillingness to deal with both it and each other.
Next week school ended and Ishizu would be moving from their hometown. They always said they’d stay in touch if something like this ever happened, but both knew how difficult that could be. Try as she might, Rayne could never accept that, especially if Ishizu left without knowing how she felt. It was a bold move, one that would be just as likely to end their friendship rather than further it, but there was no other option. It was a gamble she had had to take no-matter what it cost her. Ishizu finally broke the kiss, gasping softly in a mix of desire and breathlessness, and Rayne smiled down at the face of the innocent nymph below her.
“Ishizu..” Rayne’s gaze seemed to penetrate right through her and bore its way into her heart and soul; “Ishizu.. I..” Suddenly a torrent of emotions burst forth and she cried, uncontrollable sobs wracking her heaving shoulders. Ishizu was almost as shocked by the halt in blissful intimacy as she was by the display of the emotions she almost believed didn’t exist in her friend. Reaching behind her she pulled Rayne into an embrace and let her sob into the pillow. “Rayne.” Her voice was as soft and gentle as it ever was, even when she had been shouting it sounded mellow. Rayne loved Ishizu’s voice as much as anything else about her. “What is it? Why are you so sad?” Her voice had dropped to a concerned whisper now. Rayne’s reply came as a muffled sob and Ishizu took several moments deciphering what was said “D..Don’t go…I love you..”
Rayne sat up, her cold exterior returning, though thawed somewhat for Ishizu.
“I apologise Ishizu… I didn’t mean to ruin your pillow…” She looked away silently as Ishizu gave a little giggle. “Its okay. In fact, I’m gonna use a new pillow and hug that one every night, imagining its you!” She sighed in despair as instead of smiling, Rayne burst into a renewed flood of tears, the now visibly fragile barricades breaking once more. “W..why do you have to go anyway..? Its not fair for life to tear us apart.. we’ve only just begun to love each other… its not fai..” Rayne’s voice was reaching a despairing crescendo but this time Ishizu cut her off. She grabbed Rayne by the arms and pulled her downwards into another kiss. Rayne’s hands returned to their former position and together they began to roll on the bed, locking together with fingers, lips, and hearts. Both girls were crying now, a confusing medley of passion and sorrow, joy and despair. Finally Rayne broke the kiss, and her face lit up as for the first time since Ishizu could remember, she smiled. Ishizu choked back a thread of envy at her new love. She truly was beautiful when she wished to be. But the smile faded as Rayne saw a worried frown cross her girlfriend’s features. “Ishizu.. what is it? What’s wrong?.” She felt her eyes tearing up again as her mind raced, imagining the worst possible things that could make her lover sad so suddenly. “Please.. tell me.. it can hardly be worse than you moving away, even if it is only a few miles..” Ishizu gazed up at her, lower lip trembling. “Please.. Please don’t hate me Rayne…” It was Rayne’s turn to look worried and confused.. “I could never hate you Ishizu.. I love you!” Ishizu still looked doubtful, gazing into some seemingly infinite distance. ”I…I didn’t know how to tell you Rayne..” Rayne grabbed her arms again and shook her gently “Tell me what? You’re really scaring me now.. what’s going to happen?!”  Ishizu finally broke her gaze with the door and turned to Rayne.
“I’m.. I’m not going away..” The words were spoken so quietly as to be all but a low humming sound. “What did you say Ishizu.. I won’t get mad, please just tell me!” There was urgency and loving desperation in her voice. Ishizu visibly seemed to wilt as she sighed and muttered’ “I.. I said I’m.. not.. going away.. I never had to..” All of a sudden Ishizu’s voice became high, her words almost falling over themselves in their struggle for release. “I never had to leave Rayne.. I just… I knew how I felt about you and I was scared. Scared that there was something wrong with me, scared that you didn’t feel the same way.. Scared that you would hate me if I just came out and told you. I had to know.. but I couldn’t be the one to help you discover our love for one another…” Her voice seemed to return to its calm state before rising once again. “When you were upset just now I knew I had to tell you… I was dying inside…and now I’ve ruined everything and you’ll hate me anyway and.. and.. ” Ishizu broke down into a symphony of wailing sobs and she turned away from Rayne, too afraid to look up at a face that she knew would be filled with hurt and anger. Instead she felt a delicate hand gently grasp her chin and force her to look up, into eyes that bore no malice, no anger.
“Ishizu…” No more words passed between them, as Rayne’s lips once more found those of her partner. All the same plenty was said. ‘I could never be angry with you for this Ishizu… I LOVE YOU.. I’m just happy you’re staying with me.’ ‘Thank you Rayne, thank you for helping me find myself in you.. ’ Ishizu eventually broke the kiss and stared into the indigo eyes of the girl she had always loved in secrecy and replied “I’m glad I’m staying too!” They lay there together in each other’s arms for a while longer as they used to, but with a whole new intimacy, before falling asleep and dreaming of days to come.



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Deep deep down we all secretly love a bit of fluff, and having come across an AMV of a really cute yuri ecchi-esque (mild) anime called Strawberry Panic , i had to write a little 'oneshot' kawaii yuri scene. Dont worry there's nothing hardcore in it, and if you're looking for something like that, then go find a porno website and knock yourself out there cause you aint gonna find it here k?!

Anywhos i also wrote this to get a break from my novel Phantoms Within to hopefully rekindle my flame for it and come back to it soon (sorry :iconseptembersnow: i promise i'll start chapter 7 soon >w<;) and also to try to learn how to write really cute yet dramatic romantic scenes with oodles of emotion (LMAO oodles). It took me about 70-90 minutes non stop (including editing and spell-checking) so i hope its still godd enough cause i normally re-read my stuff like 10 times over a few days to make sure its good..

Also i'm writing this to try to get a new style of descriptive writing. Of course with a short story, compared to my novel which is waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay longer i dont have the luxury of time to build a backstory for the characters so i am forced to try to subtly include it in the description and their dialogue as well as making the characters instantly ingratiate themselves to the reader. That is one of the reasons why i've written it with you (the reader) being thrust into the action from the start at its dramatic beginnings and then reveal the history and back-story of their relationship throughout the description and dialogue. I hope its worked.

Advanced critique is much appreciated and desired and i hope i haven't dissapointed! :D

I found the pic on google so i claim no rights to creating it, they just look like the characters in this story and are uber-cute.

Think thats about it, hope you like it, if you're offended by such things dont read it and then flame me cause its your own damn fault if your A) prejudiced or B) can't appreciate literature or C) are sorely dissapointed that you havent found something to get off on, its not my fault and its not my problem, so deal with it!

Anyway, sorry for the rant, i think i'm tired and when i get tired i tend to be cranky and get guy-PMS LMAO

anywhos, hope ya like it and take care y'all!



P.S - If you guys want me to continue this story as in the love scene, or for that matter start writing it from the beginning as a whole new story, please let me know cause i'm thinking about it but i'm not sure

P.P.S - Also i'm thinking about opening myself up to writing short 'oneshot' commissions for people. If its you're own characters then of course i'll need background information on the characters and their like personalities etc first, and the same with any animes etc that you want me to do fanfiction on, if i don't know the characters then i'm gonna need the info on them too. Just 1 thing *gets ready to run from hordes of randomly-pitchfork-and-flaming-stick-weilding children* no Naruto. Naruto is an insult to good animes, the only reason its so popular is because its about ninjas and the main character turns into a girl with nothing but clouds for clothing. thats it... don't kill me (if you kill mne then i can't write for you muahahahaha) - but seriousyl their combat scenes for the most part are direct copies of like jackie chan and bruce lee martial arts movies, just google it there are several gifs that show one of.. Sakse?(i think his name is)s move-sets next to one of like bruce lees (if i remember correctly) and they're IDENTICAL...

P.P.P.S - Now not rated mature cus i realised i was being a Baka and that a mature content warning was most probably not needed for a story incorportaing only kissing and 1 mention of the word nipple, and even then not in a naked context... lol silly me
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